Michael Nguyen
BLK 43 Sims Drive
#07-203, Singapore 560043
Mr Shan Dani
Teacher in Hawthorn
100 North Bridge Road
Penizula Plaza #06 - 24
Singapore 530222
Dear Mr Shan,
Request to watch a movie,
Today I studied a lot of knowledge so I'm feeling very sleepy and exhausted. I'd like to watch a funny movie. The movie can help me learn English better and I can relax. Another reason I really realize when I watch the movie I can know many newwords and my listening improve very fast. I hope you agree with me.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely
Michael Nguyen
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2 comments:
Good, you've followed the proper format. As far as the content of the letter is concern, you have indicated that you'd like to watch a movie and reason why but you haven't specified when.
Good effort though. I'm not going to comment on your sentence structure or grammar right now, I'm focussing on the format.
Thank Shan's comment,
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