Today, I’m going to describe this picture. This picture happens in the park. I choose this picture because of I think it’s very romantic. The weather is very nice and fresh air. It’s lunch time. Someone goes to there to relax. They often sit under the big trees. Two man are sleeping on the clean lawn. They look like exhausted and very alone. I can see 2 old people. They’re talking what happen in the pass. I enjoy to see a lover. They hide in a small umbrella. They’re kissing and talk to each other about love story. That is all.
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Today, I’m going to describe this picture. This picture happens in the park. I choose this picture because of I think it’s very romantic. The weather is very nice and fresh air. It’s a lunch time. Someone goes to there to relax. They often sit under the big trees. Two mans are sleeping on the clean lawn. They look like exhausted and very alone. I can see 2 old people. They’re talking what happen in the pass. I enjoy to see a lover. They hide in a small umbrella. They’re kissing and talk to each other about the love story. That is all.
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Hey Michael, Here are more corrections:
Today, I’m going to talk about this picture.
This is a picture of a park. I chose this picture because I think it’s very romantic.
The weather is very nice and the air is fresh.
It’s lunch time and people come to this park to relax. They often sit under the big trees.
Two men are sleeping on the clean lawn. They look exhausted and very lonely. I can see two old people, they’re talking about their past.
I enjoy watching the lovers here; they are hiding under a small umbrella. They’re kissing and talking to each other lovingly.
That is all.
Thanks Shan very much !
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