This afternoon, My friends and I have watched the cartoon movie. The film has got 2 main characters. Wall-E who was living in the earth and the other character (ABC) is from the other planet. Both of them are robot . They’re very clever and hard working. Wall-E lives with a cockroach. This earth doesn’t have any people, water and trees. When the film started, I saw many big building. I thought it made from the people. It wasn’t true and in the fact It’s made from Wall-E. Everyday, He often collects the litter and creates small square. After that he arranges thing by thing to become a building. After finish his work he comes back home and relax. In the end day he charge new battery for his body to prepare tomorrow morning.
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Here is the correction to some errors I detected.
This afternoon, My friends and I watched a cartoon movie. The film had 2 main characters. Wall-E who was living on the earth, and the other character (ABC) was from a space ship. Both of them were robots. They were very clever and hard working. Wall-E lived with a cockroach. This earth didn’t have any people, water or trees.
When the film started, I saw many big buildings. I thought they were made by the people. It wasn’t true, in fact, It was made by Wall-E. Everyday, he collected litter and crashed them into small cubes. After that, he stacked them up like buildings. After finishing his work he would return home and relax. At the end of the day he would charge his battery ready for next day's work.
I didn't finish but Shan also had corrected for my writing. Thanks Shan very much !
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